I was you, you were me and here we are

[Norahnant]

I was you
You were me
We were there
You were like my teddy bear
I would love to go with you everywhere
All I want only you have been there
Just only different angle we are even if it seems to be so far
Many good things we were scar on me
The moment we had like a fantasy
Those our sweet and nice words I still be remember it all
Thanks to the one that created you on this world and let me had you to be mine, let us together for a while
Even how distance we are but I’ll send all my heart to whom my heart still beating.

My first poetry here, I may not that much nice but I do try my best for this and write from my heart.

Thanks for everyone who reading and it would be nice if you comment on my post

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

[Iron Man]

what struck me about this poem is its pure and genuine simplicity and truthfulness

I feel a kind of warmth and cosiness coming in the air

keep it up

and thanks for sharing

[روانة]

God gives you a topic Avipislmo pleased Bhetwaagdi

[Little Cat]

Yay, how cute! No pain, no tears and you made a teddy bear of the guy lol, I wasn't able to understand everything but I think your little poem is sweet, and Thank God for giving us the ones we love.

Thank you for sharing this, the teddy bear thing made me smile

[Norahnant]

Thanks for comment on my poem, tht's a great support to me