my Ex wrote it to me

[queen luv]

in a moment of a stillness,
with a vitality inspired from it
i looked up high in the sky and she was perfectly lit
i took a seat and i light a smoke but i couldn't sit
because i felt like im in a small bubble
i wished if ima rocket ,so i can go off
in a sacred place she stagnant in.
between earth and her,,that space within,
i kept worshiping *sob7an alah* on that perfet thing
i thought about all these holy tears was falling in
a tears like a rain ,a rain like abless, a bless like a sin
i only pray TO ALAH but i do pray FOR her,that's why i had sin
So..she dropped the *tears* to forgive my *bless*
Then i wondered ! why a9ln she ascended to that far
simply i realized that she is god's unique piece of art
she belongs to a superstitions or a fiction world
God is versed,i know,but the thing that i dont know is,
how the glaxy can get jealouse of how much he made her marvelous
God is effectivly a 'ONE' and 'Only',and humbly ima her beauty amorous
Humans are jealous too,but they still humans and they re sadly frivolous
How sad..
i thank god every single night that i still got eyes,because
i reminisce every single glimpse i took and she gotw me mesmerized
Me blessed..
after all these ways to ponderi excitedly reached close to her
in a stasis and like if i got a hit by a thunder i weirdly shout wher's her
i greived..and i realized,that was only a REFLECTION,a reflection of her
she's still on earth ,waitin for another 29 days..
to spread radiance again on that place..
to rebirth the 'moon'..

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

the poem is very nice!!

it is also interesting to see some Arabic words included in the poem

ur ex writes very nice poems!!

u shldnt have left him!

well i dont knw wat happened between u 2

but if he is not the one , then inshalla u will find the right one one day

Thank u for sharing this cute romantic poem with us

regards

[queen luv]

am glad u like it an i know dat i shouldnt left him bt he did lol any way its long story thanx aloot again

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

ohhh
sorry to hear that =(

I hope to see poems written by u queen love

from ur name I can tell that u have the potential of a great poet ^_*

[queen luv]

i will ensha2alla thanx alot

[من مين]

my dear sister

this is a really deep poem, it made me ponder as ur ex did

I confess, I'm not into this kind of literature, but I liked this one

some words like galaxy, moon, space and others are strong yet nice and rise the poem to the level of light imagination

thanks for sharing

[queen luv]

thanx you for ur sweet words <3

[فــارس الحـ§§§ــناء]

I describe you in one word
You are Amazing
Keep going my sister