When there was ones

[Hamza23]

When there was ones



Sometimes it is only a dream

But you find out too late

When you finally wake up

You would know that life is cruel

And there is no exit at all

To what is right or not

One day you are planning

And the next day it’s the news headlines

How come I am the last to know?

When I was the one saying it

But suddenly it isn’t mine

As if the school would attack

I got swords facing my way

As if I even started what I was saying

I wished if it was, at least less than that

I wanted a group to live in peace

But not a place to have a war

How come there are spies

Spying my every step

Did I announce for a war

I think Not

All I said was an idea

You did not have to pass

Without thinking you ran

To spread a lie you ran faster

I did not talk to a human

Or a ghost, to spread the news for me

Are all private talks too

Get the same distention

Leave the two alone talk

And stop listening to others talk

Maybe you thought of you they had

But you would know if they did

It was a shared idea that’s it

I didn’t ask for advertisements at all

What is it that makes you

Put your long nose into everything

It’s a private talk between two

It does not mean destruction

Talks between friends must never be overheard

They are two talking

Why on the world would you care?

At least if you heard something

Keep it for yourself

No thank you we don’t want any change

Don’t spread it around

You wouldn’t like it

If one day I did the same

Are you going to enjoy it

Or get pissed right away

True I no more have to talk about it

Because others for sure knows

But I wished if it was I

Or one of the two

That actually spoke

I cannot punish you

Because I am like all the others

I don’t know the source

But god will soon punish you




i know there are couple of spelling or grammar mistakes but i didnt check it as always

محتوى مخفي

يجب عليك الرد لرؤية النص المخفي

the hidden thing is only the explanation of the poem so u dont have to c it

its not important

[Iron Man]

you seem to be talented at writing poems

and i really liked what u said in an intelligent way

as for your suggestion for organizing meetings between muslims

and christians i think that's a smart idea

and never mind for being overheard

as u did no harm and your idea was lofty and noble

and if u ever find out who told this secret

call me and i wiil pull out his ears

thank u hammoza

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
you seem to be talented at writing poems

and i really liked what u said in an intelligent way

as for your suggestion for organizing meetings between muslims

and christians i think that's a smart idea

and never mind for being overheard

as u did no harm and your idea was lofty and noble

and if u ever find out who told this secret

call me and i wiil pull out his ears

thank u hammoza


thank u so much for raising my spirits

well yeah as u said i had done no harm

but before i was only thinking of how to organize it, but then i remambred that maybe not a lot of people would join,, coz the muslims in this skool r nominal

everything they do is against islam, and this ramadan most of them didnt fast it, which makes it even worse

and so i was thinkin of connectin these ideas and finding the truth among us

for the person that said it, i really wish i would know loooooool

if he is the one i think he is then i will seriously kill him lool

i think the person was siting behind me, as that girl told me,, i hate that guy sooo bad hhhh

thank u for passin by

[Little Cat]

Grrr..I read your comments before I logged in so knew what that hidden content would be MUAHAHA!!

I don't think it's worth losing nerves for anyway, if your Muslim mates don't fast then I take it they don't care about their religion and wouldn't find interest in joining your gang. It's not nice to spread people's secrets but you can make him regret it anyway, but remember that you have to make no wars like those I saw in the forum between girls and guys lol

Stay cool and don't show him you're annoyed, and be nicer than ever and you'll see how he'll try his best to make you
forget about what he's done.

The strange thing is that your Christian friend will join, does she have time for Christian and Islamic classes? You people seem to have space for everything..

Things will be OK anyway, but be careful next time, and don't tell secrets before being sure there's nobody spying around.

Salam

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Little Cat [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
Grrr..I read your comments before I logged in so knew what that hidden content would be MUAHAHA!!

I don't think it's worth losing nerves for anyway, if your Muslim mates don't fast then I take it they don't care about their religion and wouldn't find interest in joining your gang. It's not nice to spread people's secrets but you can make him regret it anyway, but remember that you have to make no wars like those I saw in the forum between girls and guys lol

Stay cool and don't show him you're annoyed, and be nicer than ever and you'll see how he'll try his best to make you
forget about what he's done.

The strange thing is that your Christian friend will join, does she have time for Christian and Islamic classes? You people seem to have space for everything..

Things will be OK anyway, but be careful next time, and don't tell secrets before being sure there's nobody spying around.

Salam


well i would try to make it interesting to those that know nothing about islam

u knw the problem is i dont know who the hell was the person, but am guessin

and for my christan friend,, she is actually catholic

can u belive that she knws about islam more than some muslims do

she is african,, and in her country they have to fast (Gabon)

well its not a case of havin time or not,, its how u organize ur own time

she only goes to church ones a week loooooool so she has plenty of time to join the club

plus when we do it its only one day a week, and for one hour only


u know i was tellin her that not coz it was a secret, but coz i wanted to share ideas,, but still y the hell would u pass something u heard between two people if it was not about u or about someone u know

thanx for passin by

[جوووواهرررر]

بارك الله فيك

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة جوووواهرررر [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
بارك الله فيك


thank u for passin by

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

it is so long , n I just found out about it now!!

so I will be back to read n comment

[دموع الاصايل]

good evening hamaza

how are you

i want to say

that your poems

is very beautiful

i enjoy with it always


god bless you

good night

[V@O]

Wonderful ! It has to be 12+ words so I would add *speechless*