The chatt between vanessa

[عبدالباسط الشمي]

The Chat Between Vanessa

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The Chat Between Vanessa

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THE CHATT BETWEEN VANESSA
AND I (ME)




It's time I articulated my fears


Days and nights forced me to say


But, unfortunately…!


I find no one besides


Even those whom I did all my best for!


As soon as the evil's homeland call


The soul of language could be dried


Just only what become so sweet?


To get clean nails and pure healthy tears…!




I used to speak once and twice


So that never a word or dirty letter


Still heard in air anymore!




One day my heart shimmy asked


When he saw the best lovely face


It was my fairly second half


And now,


There's a surprise with a hot kiss


She seriously felled over


Over my alive pains


And this, I mean you


And only you………Dr.Nemah


My God!


How good you are! My lovely fate


Either I shout or silently shake her hand


Actually she has known..


Where and When


With whom I love


Must go and live


There's no one but you!(Dr.Nemah)


Who would save my wishes


That's my hope …..


To be one tongue


To get married Today


On Tuesday!






It's time I articulated my fears


Days and nights forced me to say!!!
WRITTEN
BY
YOUR BROTHER

Abdullbaset Abdo Ali Rafea
I was born in Taiz
But , I live in Hodeidah city
Yemen

[Little Cat]

Yay! I honestly got confused when I first started to read, so had to start all over again, and then realized it was a love poem..
Well, first of all let's say I liked the poem and how it flew though the first few lines were foggy so didn't understand what you exactly meant. It's the first time I read a poem mentioning and nearly asking for marriage so that made me smile.

Best wishes for you, I hope you get what you want and what you deserve

Salam

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

sorry I moved it to the right section
Will be back to comment

Thanks in advance for the topic

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back

I got confused at the beginning as well , then after I realized too that it was a romantic poem

I liked the poem , N I think it is so cute specially the last part


thankx for sharing the poem with us

and I hope to see more of your poems in this section
Regards

[Hamza23]

nice and very well written poem

i like the way u went from confusing the reader to actually telling what goes on by the end

thanx bro for sharing with us