The Sea Can't Be Sweet part 2: The Deal

[Little Cat]

The Deal

Life passed, day by day
And down, her tears had to fall
As she heard the wind complain:
How easy it's to steal a soul!
And thoughts carried the girl away
How in her heart love made a hole
When a cursed ship once sailed
Behind seas and oceans all
She since then sad remained
With a broken smile and memories torn
By then she was a friend of pain
Until she got a wakeup-call
When steps led her to the place
That very well she had known
And everything seemed the same
Except her heart that slowly broke
To end the patience she had –to wait
And still she stood as she spoke:

"Oh huge sea that people fear
And monster that swallows sun
I cried until ran out my tears
So to ask your help, now I've come"

The sea was wise but did not know
What the girl wanted or why she came
Curious it was but did not show
But asked for things to be explained

"What I ask from you is to return to me
My love that years ago was gone
And in return I'll make you pleased
By anything you ask to be done"

"What a fair thing this is to me!
Many things I desire but I ask for one;
How I wish –my friend- to become sweet
So will my wish soon be done?"

The hardest word could be was no
So "yes" she said " in three days"
And then confused she had to go
Without a single word to say.

Written in June, 2009

To be continued...

[Hamza23]

what does the sea has to do with him

nice

but still waitin for the end

and whos the sea's friend

[Little Cat]

Hey Duaa, thanks for commenting and the guy went behind seas so the sea who stole him can send him back
When the sea mentioned "friend", it meant the girl. You know strangers can be called that sometimes
I think there's one part left.. Will try to finish

[Hamza23]

ohh now i got it

i will be waiting

i know u will finish it fast coz u wanna know ma evil plan hhh

u r evil too hhh

[Little Cat]

Will try my best to finish it, but can't promise when it'll be done
Still curious and I'm not that evil trust me ~^.^~ salam

[Hamza23]

hhhh

a cat that isnt evil

NO WAY hhhhh

come on i can c ur caty nails hhhh

i think u will finish it fast hhh coz u still want to know hhh

[Sam1Sam]

awww it's really name nice meanings.

[Iron Man]

nice story

I did enjoy it

waiting eagerly for the last part

thank u dear little cat

[Little Cat]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Sam1Sam

awww it's really name nice meanings.

Thank you, happy to read your comment

[Little Cat]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

nice story

I did enjoy it

waiting eagerly for the last part

thank u dear little cat

Thanks for commenting, knowing more people are waiting for the last part encourages
I hope you've read first part too

Peace