A Door To Heaven

[Little Cat]

He was too weak to put his feet on the ground
So he had to move creeping for it..
It took some minutes before he reached.
He, scared knocked the strange white door..
He knocked louder without receiving any answer
So he pulled the door towards him and it opened
Then he saw a light coming from inside.
It looked like it was a door to heaven.
He, shocked stood watching the light without a move.
He stood there thinking.. a minute passed while he was still frozen..
Finally, the drunk realized it was the fridge.

Written for the contest Shock Me With The Last Line, on the 23rd of July, 2008

[Hamza23]

hhhh its in the wrong place

i will tell marioma about moving it

anyways nice poem

did u get any trophies??



seriously that hilarious hhh

[Little Cat]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hamza23

hhhh its in the wrong place

i will tell marioma about moving it

anyways nice poem

did u get any trophies??



seriously that hilarious hhh

Hey that's not a romantic piece so no need to be moved to the romantic forum anyways thanks, doesn't matter where it'll be put. And no trophies this time, the judge said it was a nice entry but didn't win this time..

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Little Cat [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
Hey that's not a romantic piece so no need to be moved to the romantic forum anyways thanks, doesn't matter where it'll be put. And no trophies this time, the judge said it was a nice entry but didn't win this time..


thats for all poems hhh

ok then let it be here


hhh too bad u didnt win hhh

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

hahahahah

OMG that is so unbelievable
seriously the last line surprised me < I was like WTH !!!

A very good poem to be written about opening a fridge ^_^

btw I have promised myself not to log in anymore till the 22end

but I saw ur topic and changed my mind ^_^


thanks for the poem sis

I will keep it here , but I will add ur poem to the guide , so members can refer to it at any time

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بسـ الطفـε(●̮̮̃•̃)зـوله ــمة [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
hahahahah

OMG that is so unbelievable
seriously the last line surprised me < I was like WTH !!!

A very good poem to be written about opening a fridge ^_^

btw I have promised myself not to log in anymore till the 22end

but I saw ur topic and changed my mind ^_^


thanks for the poem sis

I will keep it here , but I will add ur poem to the guide , so members can refer to it at any time



y until the 22nd ??

whats wrong ?? exams

good luck

hhh u r worse than me

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

yea examz :(

I should block the forum

stop talking to me guyssss

don't make me curious to check what u said

^_^

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بسـ الطفـε(●̮̮̃•̃)зـوله ــمة [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
yea examz :(

I should block the forum

stop talking to me guyssss

don't make me curious to check what u said

^_^


too bad hhh

do what i did hhh

i asked ma bro to unplug the pc ,, and u know what i did with the laptop hhh

i made sure he forgot about it hhhh

and then i was usin it when i got bored


but u should be smarter and give them to someone else hhh

good luck hhhh

and go offline already

[Little Cat]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بسـ الطفـε(●̮̮̃•̃)зـوله ــمة

hahahahah

OMG that is so unbelievable
seriously the last line surprised me < I was like WTH !!!

A very good poem to be written about opening a fridge ^_^

btw I have promised myself not to log in anymore till the 22end

but I saw ur topic and changed my mind ^_^


thanks for the poem sis

I will keep it here , but I will add ur poem to the guide , so members can refer to it at any time

Thanks Mariam, and you didn't have to comment now if you had exams until the 22nd, my poem can wait.. Anyways thanks a lot, the purpose of my poem was to surprise people so glad the last line has surprised you.

Chaos!

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Little Cat [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
Thanks Mariam, and you didn't have to comment now if you had exams until the 22nd, my poem can wait.. Anyways thanks a lot, the purpose of my poem was to surprise people so glad the last line has surprised you.

Chaos!


for her nothing can wait hhhhh