The Reasons You Are Beautiful

[mr.zaidan]

The Reasons You Are Beautiful

To the girl whose beauty is present in all seasons

I tell you why you are beautiful, here are the reasons
Your beauty extends into the heavens
it goes on forever and never lessens
Even when the clouds heighten
you are here and the world brightens
You are like a fruit that constantly ripens
your beauty continues to grow no mater what happens
My fondness for you constantly deepens
because every time I see you my heart starts to weaken
You make everything else appear hollow
where ever you are loveliness is sure to follow
You shine so bright you cast your own shadow
a beauty that others would love to borrow
But try as they might your beauty they will never catch
because something like you they could never match
Your beauty seems to increase with every breathe
it tests the limits my imagination can stretch
It makes me question if what I am seeing is real
I only know it is true by the way that I feel
Your beauty is so vast it can't be concealed
there is no hiding it your beauty is always revealed
The power of your beauty is the world's greatest gift
the heaviest boulder it could easily lift
A girl this perfect I never knew
all that changed the moment I met you
Heaven on Earth I was not aware
until I met a girl that was crafted with such care
You would be the answer to a prayer
if someone asked for something rare with beauty to spare
If I had a choice I would choose this girl over air
for air can't compare to a girl not found elsewhere

[Hamza23]

nice poem

thanx for sharing

[mr.zaidan]

welcome man

thanks 4 passing

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

I know I know , my beauty never ends ;P


wat can I say about the poem

great as usual


n there z a stanza that took ma breath away

If I had a choice I would choose this girl over air

this stanza is so cute < u wld rather sacrfice urself for her ohhhhh

GOd bless the 2 of u mr n misses zidan

Regards

[بسمتي شقا]

oooooh sooo nice poem

thanx 4 sharing ^_^

[Iron Man]

thank u Zizo for sharing this wonderful poem

you're great as usual

regards

[mr.zaidan]

sure ur beauty never ends cos u r an angel MeMo

Thankx for the jeweler passing ..

Thanks 4 u basmeti sha2a

And 1000 thankxx for u Bro

regards

[Little Cat]

I wow and wow then wow again
That's impressive, I call this a poem and I like this poem, the first good thing I've noticed is that your poem is rhymed, rhyming is good, free verse is useless that's what I think.
I wonder how beautiful that girl would be, but I think beauty is not everything after all.

The first and last lines were my favourite, middle lines seemed to be forced. Wonderful way for ending and it was romantic indeed.