My dear Friend: Thank you for making me Depressed

[Hamza23]

depressed



What have I don’t that I feel depressed?

Out of no where feeling rejected

If you had told me then that would have been great

But not knowing why makes it even worst

Tell my heart a clue

Give it to me now I want to know

Before this fire burn my heart

Why did you turn at me?

For no reason given to me

Or even a clue about what’s going on

Are you really a friend,

When you leave your best friend with no clue?

Leaving me in the dark knowing nothing

Is there anything I can explain to you?

Is there a way to prove the truth?

Why wouldn’t you tell me like I do to you?

I never kept anything from you

Told you every single thing happens

Even if it was a personal gossip about you

True sometimes I am stubborn and mad

But I will always do look back and say

“Wow it really made a difference”

But my question to you now is

Why did you change?

Isn’t what I did enough?

Is it someone that stopped you?

Who’s that and why?

Look dear, the night is going to be long now

Thinking about nothing but what I did

I have done nothing new

But wanting to know what’s wrong

Is it something I said before?

Or is it something I did before?

Is it the way I act?

Is it my way of talking?

What is it?

I think we solved that long time ago

What the hell is new now?

You are acting too weird

That makes me wish I never spoke

That makes me wish I never did a thing

Why are you punishing me without giving me a clue?

My will now is to die in peace

Sine my life was a disaster

Death might be more truthful

THAN YOU ARE

thank you
plz try to not discuss it a lot with me

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

oh!! but I am glad I came every thing has been sorted out with her I love this poem it shows ur anger ^_* Thank u for the poem hamozy

[بسمتي شقا]

thanx 4 poem it sooo nice

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
oh!! but I am glad I came every thing has been sorted out with her I love this poem it shows ur anger ^_* Thank u for the poem hamozy




u should have seen how depressed i was hhhh

i couldnt even finish my essay looooooooooooooool

and so i will work hard on it tonight to finish it all

wish me luck

THE GREAT DEPRESSION.

i almos forget hhhh thanx for r passin by hhhhhhh

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بسمتي شقا [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
thanx 4 poem it sooo nice


thanx for the great pass

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

HAmoozy I need to tell u something


U r an emo

hahah na jkz

ur poem is so wonderful honestly

I will add it to the pinned topic
regards

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
HAmoozy I need to tell u something


U r an emo

hahah na jkz

ur poem is so wonderful honestly

I will add it to the pinned topic
regards



no marioma am not hhh

maybe u r hhhhhhh

thanx for pinning it

i will show it to her today

coz she appriciates it when i write rather than when i shout

[Little Cat]

Hi,
Your poem shows anger though I don't know what the problem exactly is. I noticed few mistakes like in the first line, you wrote "don't" and I think you meant "done", other mistake in line "not knowing why makes it even worst", I think you meant "worse".. It seems like anger affected you that you couldn't even notice what you've been writing cause I think your English is good..
Thanks

[Hamza23]

well coz u r new here u might never had realized this

i dont write the poems somewhere else

i just write it the moment i have that feeling

and btw i dont check it either

welcome to this forum

and fyi i know about these simple mistakes

and if u do know them then i think its good,, and ask everyone in here they knw what it means

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

^^

hamza u have improved a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

u should be so happy with ur English level now

mashalla u are only 14 ,
I can imagine ur writing in the next 4 yrs , I will be embarrassed to post my poems here hhhhh

don't feel discouraged when someone mentions ur mistakes

I know u will be a pro soon hhhh

s be easy on us when u become pro ^_*