Complete me

[Hamza23]

hi all

for the last few days i noticed that no one is active and decided maybe this thread will do something

well how about we do thing competition

we will call it COMPLETE ME

in this thread someone will write something,, a line to 5 about anything they want

and so the next person will complete it with anything they want to

let me show u some examples

why must all the love belong to the past..
isnt there anything left, that still could last?
true love is whats last for ever
and the past love is a lie
if u ever have been so sad
u wont be as much sad as broken loving heart
y is there always something bad
stops the lovers living together
true love will always last
even if one of the couples died
only few lovers got married
while the others r heart broken
y dont we forget the love
and start a new life
every one will live in peace
and no one will have a broken heart
life would always fall apart on us
but forgetting the past is not the way
its a step we should begin in faith
a step we should have it free

true love may be rare but it surley does exist
all we gotta do is dare, try again, nd make a twist
it's just a paradoy, nd its glare! nothing hard to resist!
theres no more to spare, coz love is life (or so we 'think')?
love and life are different ideas
to love doesnt always has to mean couples
love could come from cozins as bros or sisrs[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
love comes from grannies [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
love comes from uncles and aunts[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
love comes from ur own bros and sisrs[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
and its always from ur parents pure heart [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
love doesnt always has to mean two couples love each other
but also a beloved family
pure heart creat pure love
pure love is pure life
pure life is what we need
to live in peace
but there is always diffrent colors in the world
to make us feel proud for the love we have
even hate creates new strong relations
there is love but rare


here is a different example


Love is like the breath .. if u will not breath u gonna die

love is like the breath
if u didnt breath u wouldnt survive
the heart beats r like a drum
musical and magical dream
but love is also a sword
if u didnt aim it right u will break a heart
its either urs or ur ex-couple
be careful to not eat too much honey
coz eating the same thing might damage u
the honey is like the love
if u over ate it u might end up lonely



i hope u got the idea

btw if u think the poem should end after few replies then u should start with a new heading

lets try to write the longest novel

lets start with this phrase

blank mind

siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

whos gonna be the luky person that will end it

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

memememememe

before completing u^_^ I want to thank u for the brilliant I idea ,
we can improve our poetic styles by this way

^_*


BLANK MIND


siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace



continue ^_^

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
memememememe

before completing u^_^ I want to thank u for the brilliant I idea ,
we can improve our poetic styles by this way

^_*


BLANK MIND


siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace



continue ^_^





thanx for ur pass

[Hamza23]

BLANK MIND


siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace

i thought my ride isnt over yet
i had to walk and start searching
maybe i will find something interesting
sadly,, everyone left me here locked
i cant even look outside this little window
why are there white blankets?
white walls and ceiling??
and white door??
everything is pure white
that makes me wants to scream out loud
i want a way out of this world
my world is limited now
after that day when i sudnly got mad
and people thought i had gotten naught
and to the mental hospital they sent me
saying my problems will be fixed
should i call this home?
or prison that stole my life?
if you people thought i was ok
and asked for my problems instead of this
wouldnt that have been a better solution
for that now i can no longer breath the air
and my hands will be always kept tied up
my mind is now empty
for that i have been locked
and put away from humanity
what is it that i did wrong
how could i have been lived normally

SORRY NOW U MAY CONTINUE
LOL LETS MAKE THIS EVEN LONGER
AND MAYBE AFTER WE FINISH WE WILL C WHATS ITS MOSTLY ABOUT,, AND WRITE A DIFFERENT TITLE FOR IT??

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

Ok but soon

coz I was busy with my cousins
n they r leaving this sunday

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
Ok but soon

coz I was busy with my cousins
n they r leaving this sunday



inshaallah we will soon finish it

lol good luck with ur cozins

and i will be waiting

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace

i thought my ride isnt over yet
i had to walk and start searching
maybe i will find something interesting
sadly,, everyone left me here locked
i cant even look outside this little window
why are there white blankets?
white walls and ceiling??
and white door??
everything is pure white
that makes me wants to scream out loud
i want a way out of this world
my world is limited now
after that day when i sudnly got mad
and people thought i had gotten naught
and to the mental hospital they sent me
saying my problems will be fixed
should i call this home?
or prison that stole my life?
if you people thought i was ok
and asked for my problems instead of this
wouldnt that have been a better solution
for that now i can no longer breath the air
and my hands will be always kept tied up
my mind is now empty
for that i have been locked
and put away from humanity
what is it that i did wrong
how could i have been lived normally


**********************
the unclear Images have changed again

in an empty forest I was sent

in front of me standing ,my creature of pain

no energy left inside me to resist it

I am a prisoner in the world of my mentality

And my pain has grown stronger than ever before

A monster or a God , I'm not sure.


but it has a temptation to defeat me


and for that I am sure






continue hammozy

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace

i thought my ride isnt over yet
i had to walk and start searching
maybe i will find something interesting
sadly,, everyone left me here locked
i cant even look outside this little window
why are there white blankets?
white walls and ceiling??
and white door??
everything is pure white
that makes me wants to scream out loud
i want a way out of this world
my world is limited now
after that day when i sudnly got mad
and people thought i had gotten naught
and to the mental hospital they sent me
saying my problems will be fixed
should i call this home?
or prison that stole my life?
if you people thought i was ok
and asked for my problems instead of this
wouldnt that have been a better solution
for that now i can no longer breath the air
and my hands will be always kept tied up
my mind is now empty
for that i have been locked
and put away from humanity
what is it that i did wrong
how could i have been lived normally


**********************
the unclear Images have changed again

in an empty forest I was sent

in front of me standing ,my creature of pain

no energy left inside me to resist it

I am a prisoner in the world of my mentality

And my pain has grown stronger than ever before

A monster or a God , I'm not sure.


but it has a temptation to defeat me


and for that I am sure






continue hammozy

thats hard hhhh

let me start thinkin

[Hamza23]

siting in a room all alone
thinking about what i missed
having no information at all
all i c is nothing
BUT white walls all around me
not knowing where it ends
and where it starts

Why am I all alone

Isolated in this place

I thought it was HOME

but this word has no trace

i thought my ride isnt over yet
i had to walk and start searching
maybe i will find something interesting
sadly,, everyone left me here locked
i cant even look outside this little window
why are there white blankets?
white walls and ceiling??
and white door??
everything is pure white
that makes me wants to scream out loud
i want a way out of this world
my world is limited now
after that day when i sudnly got mad
and people thought i had gotten naught
and to the mental hospital they sent me
saying my problems will be fixed
should i call this home?
or prison that stole my life?
if you people thought i was ok
and asked for my problems instead of this
wouldnt that have been a better solution
for that now i can no longer breath the air
and my hands will be always kept tied up
my mind is now empty
for that i have been locked
and put away from humanity
what is it that i did wrong
how could i have been lived normally


**********************
the unclear Images have changed again

in an empty forest I was sent

in front of me standing ,my creature of pain

no energy left inside me to resist it

I am a prisoner in the world of my mentality

And my pain has grown stronger than ever before

A monster or a God , I'm not sure.


but it has a temptation to defeat me


and for that I am sure

not able to do a thing i waited
silently i did stand all alone
i saw my future and past
in few seconds it passed
for a clue i started thinking
but still my mind is not working it out
of an escape i searched
but no hope was found now
oh lord what is happening to me
now i am feeling too hot and its raining on me
i looked far at the vast area i was in
and i saw the yellow mountains of sand
escaping the reality is hard now
and now i know whom i was facing in the forest
it is the pain and how i feel about it
first i was locked in, and then facing my worst pain
and now heating in my broken heart
whats next??
where will my destiny take me?
is my mentality ever going to be back once more
to the days when i was a kid
kicking the sand
instead of this feeling
of rejection and solitariness
well my life be better soon
and how so should it be?
is it my fault or someone else's ??

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

I think u ended it!!

let us start a new one
k?