The Story Of LINA: A Turning Point

[Hamza23]

before you start there are two people speaking a girl and a guy,, the girl is the one with the gray colored font,, and te guy is the one with the purple font

The Story Of LINA: A Turning
Point

Have you ever realized what you have done?
Have you ever known what’s going on?
Did you ever meant to do that?
How so can I know the truth?
I never knew love will be a pain
To my heart it was a sword
And it left leaving pain in my heart
Leaving tears flooding like waterfall
Yes this is me, that is my heart now
It is bleeding so fast
And the tear is dropped
Creating waterfall with no mountain
And the forest all around
But the water is now blood
What’s left in me is the blood
That will dry out soon tonight
I never knew life isn’t fair
I never knew it is a pain
I never even wanted to know that
But my eyes did and my heart did
Calling me, we want, and we need
But I refused all along
Until that day, the dark day
When I saw you coming towards me
When you opened your heart
And handed the key to me
But I kept mine closed
Until the day I when I was all over you
On the day I thought you became wise
But you were fool and dum
You broke my heart
And made sure no one told me
Why did you do it behind me?
Why wouldn’t you declare
If you would had then the pain was going to be less
For how long did you think I wouldn’t know
I aint a fool, I aint a blind
I know the thing before you were born
I even know how many times you breath
How fool did you think I was??

I am sorry my dear
It really wasn’t I
It was a fool inside me
I was in the dark and never saw the light
But when I saw you the sun rose
And I had a meaning of my life
Now I know why people enjoy life
Now I know what love is
Now my future is bright
The dream of my life changed
The goal is to win the heart of yours
And the night dream is to look in your eyes
I am sorry for what I have done before
In your love I couldn’t control
With your eyes looking at me deeply
With your tears you dropped for my mistakes
What a fool I am to hurt my queen
My empire is now yours, and you are my queen
I will serve you day and night
And make sure you move no finger of yours
I will serve you until the day you speak to me
Speak to me and say “Thank You Honey”
I was forced
I was forced not to be with you
What forced me wasn’t I
But was the fear
The fear of not having what I wanted
He fear of being useless
The fear of being hated
And so I fallowed other people
Thinking they were wise leaders

All what you said are lies
I never will believe any more lies
I got sick of you running away
It seems to me as if I were a monster
A monster that will eat you
What have I don’t to live in pain?
And who are you to act that way?
I am not less than you, and I wont fallow
I am not the type that fallows her wants
When I want something I would sit on a chair
Sit and clap……
Then I get what I want
I will see thousands whom I really deserve
It is not only you who is dum
It is really me
For wasting my time for a freak
Even though I knew all about your past
Even a saliva on your face is too muchj
Too much for the dirty things you have done
How fool do you think I was?
Don’t you have a God?
Don’t you believe in God
Knowing that you are Muslim
With Muslim roots
Why are you acting a lot
Face me for once with the truth
Don’t you run behind me, and laugh
Don’t act all romantic with me
And a joker behind me
Now that I realized the truth
Nothing can ever make me go back
Nothing will ever make my heart soft
Nothing will make me love once more
The pain will last and never wear off
And the past will be written in books
Lasting history is what will be named
In my heart it will keep scratching it
With no fear of over bleeding, nor death
My soul is now lost in the middle of the dark
Making me say everything in darkness
Why were you forced, speak to me
Tell my heart with no spoken words
Give it a hint and hope
To know what is lasting in the heart of yours
I am not forcing you to love me
Nor I will force myself to love you
It is time for me to look away
And walk into my own road
Don’t ever try to enter my life
Although I will be waiting for you
Breaking my heart is enough
And I can no longer stand it

TO BE CONTINUED

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

I like this story< dialogue ,poem style

waiting for the remaining parts to give my opinion?
^_^

[Iron Man]

nice story

thanks my dear

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

hamaza I am still waiting ^_^

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
I like this story< dialogue ,poem style

waiting for the remaining parts to give my opinion?
^_^





i might finish in two days time hhhhh

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
nice story

thanks my dear





wait until the end and we will c if it was nice

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
hamaza I am still waiting ^_^




i had guests

some ministers from oman

now i will search for the paper and start typing

[Hamza23]

What are you saying?
Are you telling the truth?
I was a fool, and now I changed
I woke up with a shock of what I did
I realized everything lately
Now it’s too late to change the past
Now I will never forgive myself
How am I ever going to look in to your eyes?
After all these terrible mistakes I have done
If I could I would build you a golden palace
For you to ask for forgiveness and a new page
A blank page that allows me to write I promises I will never break your heart once more
I can never live without you
I can never live wit your anger
I can never forgive my past behaviors
Please forgive me, and open a blank page
I will fill it with roses, and letters of love
And make sure you are smiling and happy
From now on you are the boss
Order me sir to serve you
Walk in the red carpet with roses
And I will be in your back throwing roses
Come on and walk, and fill the carpet with your foot steps
Trying won’t change anything
Do it for my heart and soul
I really do love you
And I would like you to try the feeling
The feeling of being in heaven


Let me try being with you
But you should know I am not weak
I have eyes of an eagle
And nails of a bear
I will never forgive you if you did it again
Once was enough, and I wont like another
Why would you want to destroy me???
^^
NOW after I tried I feel great
Feeling there is always someone watching for me
Knowing I can fall and you will grab me
Knowing that you will make me fly
No words can no describe my feeling
How shall I thank you for everything?
All these days I have been waiting
And finally I am no loner in pain
I feel like being in heaven
And flying like a bird
No on can catch me, yes no one can
Only me and you flying all alone
And other people are looking with jealousy
Nothing will ever stop us from being together
No one will ever dare to touch our love
All the women had dreamed
But none had hope and faith
I alone suffered a lot
And now I alone enjoy


Glade to hear that from you my dear
It means a lot, more than anything to me
I fallowed my heart not my life
And still I apologize for the past
But now this is how I really feel
Now its time for me to hand you the key
The key to the deep lock in my hear
Let me show you all the truth
But don’t EVER tear for the past
Now I learned a lesson from all the past
And now I know how to be truthful in love
Remember the day when we first met
It was my turning point that time
You were the first I talked to
And you were great and lovely in words
You were active and full with happiness
I could never had imagined I will ruin it
All the days were bright and lovely
UNTIL the day you slipped aside
And decided to help a friend
And forgot yourself in the back
You were pushing her forward
And stepping two steps back
And I said to “fallow your wants”
But I got sick of pretending to like her
And so the best way is to leave her
That shouldn’t bother you
It was her who was selfish
All she thought of is herself
Thinking she is good looking
But she truly wasn’t to me
Showing off with dum things
Nothing interesting she talked about
About her life with boys only she talked
But the truth is hidden
No one knows if it is right or wrong
But what I care about isn’t that
I want to listen to no more of her SHAME
She thinks it’s a pride but it is a disaster
Knowing she is crazy and abnormal
Realizing al she cares about is boys
Ask her to forget me
Ask her to not mention me
Ask her to go to the others
She says she has at least 18
But where are they? And who knows?
Tell her I am not interested
Inform her of the “hidden truth”
I can stand it no more than this
And either you, you can’t too
Only for five times we hanged
But it was all the same
“I remember this guy in BLAH, and BLAH”
BLAH, BLAH, this guy BLAH BLAH
SHUT UP, I don’t want to know more
Why I forget me
I hope you are now enjoying dear
I am doing my best to satisfy you
All I want back is what you want



I am sorry my dear for that mistake
I was doing what a friend might do
I cleared her path and pushed her forward
And all I get back now is ignorance
Not realizing the feelings of yours
Sorry my dear I was a fool
I didn’t realize it till the moment
The moment when you declared everything
But now it’s just too late to do anything about it
I know it’s hard to act all the time
Because I feel the same now days
What I hope for is me holding my temper
Because at anytime I could explode
Why the hell does she show off?
I can never imagine her being pretty
What would she have done to herself?
Now days she plays perfection
What if she was perfect??
She might think she is abnormal
Thank God I have brain and heart
And feel others pain
Who does se think she is?
She isn’t the boss of neither you nor mine
We do what we like and prefer
We are over respecting her
Because she is older, we forgive her
Because she was more immature, we forgot
Because she knew more, we learnt
Because she was heart broken, we cheered
Because she was brave, we respected
Because she was a friend, we gave her credit
Because she was close, we erased the distance
Because she was dear to me, I forgive
BUT
What’s the point of doing all that?
Making her think she is the boss of us?
Picturing an image of fakeness
I got sick of all this
Let’s mind our own business from now on
Only the two of us
With no on else other than that



I agree with everything you said
My dear, you are the sea
And I am the boat trying to discover you
Lets hope for a bright future with no pain
I want to say one final word
I love you


And I do too My Love
Thank You My dear

THE END

[Hamza23]

the story is not 100%true

most of it might be brought from imagination

but the main points are REAL

espacially about the 18 guys for the girl hhh but i guess she is a lier for saying that

ENJOY

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

ok now with my questions ( detective mariam)


I have a strong feeling that the gray girl z Duaa ^_*

is that right?

Lina is the one who asked u to stay away from purple?

and are the last 2 paragraphs real [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]