Am I invisible to you

[Hamza23]

hi all

Am I invisible to you

It is true I am not the only
one
It is true I am neither the first nor the last person
You might receive thousands of letters
From fans that feel the same
But no one will ever carry the same feeling
No one will have the feelings I carry for you
It is unfair,, you should feel I am around
I don’t sleep because I kept thinking
Thinking of how to impress you
But you never showed that you care
It is inhuman like to do that
Where are you from, MARS?
Where is your heart, why is it cold
I can not leave you alone
I must make you feel me
Am I invisible to you?

[Hamza23]

i wrote this poem in winter vacation after waking up hearing a voice saying to me "AM I INVISIBLE TO U"

[دموع الاصايل]

dear hamza

do you know

ilove you writing very very much

you can write a nice poems

bcoz you have soul and agreat feeling

nice topic

thanks alot for you

with my best regards

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دموع الاصايل [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
dear hamza

do you know

ilove you writing very very much

you can write a nice poems

bcoz you have soul and agreat feeling

nice topic

thanks alot for you

with my best regards









thanx dear for this wonderful pass and these beautiful words

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

I didn't know there is a creepy story behind the poem O_O

it is so sad when someone feels this way , being invisible

i hope no one get to experience this awful feeling

Thank u for the nice poem hamza

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
I didn't know there is a creepy story behind the poem O_O

it is so sad when someone feels this way , being invisible

i hope no one get to experience this awful feeling

Thank u for the nice poem hamza

well as i said before ,, some how someone said to me as i wake up "am i invisible to u?" and i guess i know whos that right now

thank u sister for passing by

[xena rafidain]

it is really wonderful poem
there is a guy in the collage once shouted in my face
(am i invisible to u )
hahahahahaha he scared me

thank u so much for the nice poem hamza

nice to meet your writings

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة xena rafidain [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
it is really wonderful poem
there is a guy in the collage once shouted in my face
(am i invisible to u )
hahahahahaha he scared me

thank u so much for the nice poem hamza

nice to meet your writings





it was funny what he did hhh i guess u steped on him or something

but for me it was when i woke up,, i heard a soft voice, but a man's voice and he said to me " am i invisible to u??" and i was like WTH and so i wrote few words describing someone's feelings that i knw thy r toward who and y

thanx for passin by sis

glade u liked it

[LoReEn]

No one will have the feelings I carry for you
It is unfair,, you should feel I am around

wooooow

It is realy

very nice poem

thank you alot

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة LoReEn [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
wooooow

It is realy

very nice poem

thank you alot





thanx alot for passing by