Sonnet : My Love

[Hamza23]

My Love

Oh when you come around me
Feels my body could just soar
The words that you’re telling me
Are the reasons why I endure
Baby when you’re next to me
All the words I say betray my mood
No there's no more things that I can declare
Oh I’m trying to reply what you said
But you're smile that keeps me magnificent
Keeps me awake all night long everyday
Dear how hard it is for me to wait
Oh lord, I’m counting every day
A day by a day, until the minute
Comes, when you and I eye to eye



after u read this what do u think haha
when i read it to class someone was tearing
not telling u who lol

<its actually a song, my sister and i made it> :P

[Iron Man]

in fact , it's a wonderful sonnet Hammoza

we diidn't know that you are a good poet

keep it up

[Hamza23]

thanx for passing by

nothing is more wonderful than ur pass

[دموع الاصايل]

Dear how hard it is for me to wait
Oh lord, I’m counting every day
A day by a day, until the minute
Comes, when you and I eye to eye

helllo hamza
how are you today

i want to say
your poem it is very abeautiful

and turly
really you are good an nice poet

thank alot for abeautiful wordss

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دموع الاصايل [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
Dear how hard it is for me to wait
Oh lord, I’m counting every day
A day by a day, until the minute
Comes, when you and I eye to eye

helllo hamza
how are you today

i want to say
your poem it is very abeautiful

and turly
really you are good an nice poet

thank alot for abeautiful wordss


thanx a lot for ur cheer up

today i am happy that u came here and saw the poem

thanx a lot for ur pass

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

you are a great poet indeed , Mashalla ,
I am sure u will have a great future in writing poems

just keep writing

and for the person I guess it is the one who likes you

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥ [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
you are a great poet indeed , Mashalla ,
I am sure u will have a great future in writing poems

just keep writing

and for the person I guess it is the one who likes you


whos that,, i mean give me a hint hhhh

when i read it to the class all of them were there

thanx for passing by sister