Children Of GAZA

[Hamza23]

hi all

i wrote this for my poem presentation

hope u wont cry


Bombings are occurring here and there
Little kids are being killed
Why are we getting killed?
We are still little kids don’t you care?
We want freedom like others.

Everyday we see more blood
For no reason kids have been bombed
Is it their fault to be alive?
Were they the ones who nagged your life?

From the day we were born
We see crimes and bloods thrown
Hold some papers and some pens
And look at the drawing that results.

Our dream is to live in peace
With mother and father around
Playing with other kids
And smiles filling our faces.

But these are only dreams
That won’t come true easily
UNITE is what is missing
And it won’t ever exist.

[Iron Man]

it touched my feelings this poem and broke my heart

you know , we feel awfully sorry for the tragedy that happened in Ghaza

and when I see the poor children crying over their killed parents I feel ashamed

of the Arab weakness and powerlessness

thanks Hammoza , the poem is amazing

keep it up

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

it touched my feelings this poem and broke my heart

you know , we feel awfully sorry for the tragedy that happened in Ghaza

and when I see the poor children crying over their killed parents I feel ashamed

of the Arab weakness and powerlessness

thanks Hammoza , the poem is amazing

keep it up

i wonder how many tissues u used

thanx for passing by

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

I will go off topic to talk about what is happening

Isreal has always committed crimes against humanity

, but no one can do anything to stop them , because they have a massive power , they basically control the world

what makes me sad is that Arabs are taking no actions to stop Isreal ,

the only thing left is to pray for those who are still alive , for palestine which is still suffering


n hope to witness the day when Palestine z free again


Hamooza

your poem shows what a great person u r indeed , u r one of the few ppl who really cares about the situation there

God bless u sister

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥

I will go off topic to talk about what is happening

Isreal has always committed crimes against humanity

, but no one can do anything to stop them , because they have a massive power , they basically control the world

what makes me sad is that Arabs are taking no actions to stop Isreal ,

the only thing left is to pray for those who are still alive , for palestine which is still suffering


n hope to witness the day when Palestine z free again


Hamooza

your poem shows what a great person u r indeed , u r one of the few ppl who really cares about the situation there

God bless u sister

when i read ur comment i cried

<next time i aint readin it in class >

everyone r talkin with out doing any actions

the religious people always say <lets move on and fight> but when it gets to them to make their teens do it they stand behind and say <we r scared no one is going to be left for our wives >

y dont u start action not negotiate with someone else to do it??

y dont u look at how u react when it gets to u .


lol sorry i became too emotional haha

thanx for passing by

[merry cage]

oh God help them and kill all the jewish men


thanks hamza for this poem

may allah bless u

[Hamza23]

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة merry cage [فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]
oh God help them and kill all the jewish men


thanks hamza for this poem

may allah bless u


not all the jewish r the same ,, so dont wish on all the jewish

thanx for passing by sis

[Hamza23]

sorry to rise this thread again but i have one little Q

was this poem offensive to any of u??

coz today i had a quick conversation with ma b-teacher and he said he read it and he think its a bit offensive for him coz he is american

well true the poem is more like blaming US for whats going on in there ,, but any other points ??

[mayse]

[I want to cry
this poem can touch the feelling of every one read it
he broke my heart because he show the black truth which we are passed them
how's i think we can not do any
JUST OUR GOD
THANK YOU SO MUCH

[Hamza23]

thax mayse for passing by

u know all people say is "i am with u, god is with u and u will be fine" how can they be fine without our help??

YES WE CAN DO IT

yes we can change their present and make them have a blessing future

dear lets stop talklin and have some actions being taken