"When, Then , And Now"

[Hamza23]

hi all

i didnt post any poem for long time

so i decided to post a VERY long poem

i wrote it couple of weeks before the skool exams

hope u like it

When all the doors are closed
When everyone ignore
When you feel lonely
When you miss me
When no heart opens for you
when the pockets are empty
when the sadness is full
when it rains heavily
when the sun doesn't rise
when the sun stops shining
when you are locked alone
when you draw sadness
when your face forgets happiness
when the sky is empty
when no star shines your way
when no moon says goodnight
when the sun shines in black
when the dark is the whole world
when only you live in the world
when your image disappears
when i forget you
when no one looks at you
when you feel empty
when nothing interests you
when you are bored the whole time
when you have no idea
when you loss your soul
when you loss your balance
when you think it is over
when you laugh a nervous laughter
when nothing is new
when your heart is broken
when love forgets you
when you are alone
when your love disappoint you
when your heart die in a war
when the war is huge
when it eats your mind
when you get blind
when your heart is blind
when your heart die
when you are sad
when you have nothing to do

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

Then remember me
Then remember I can help
Then remember I will help
Then remember I will fly to you
Then remember I am not too far
Then remember your friend
Then remember the happy days
Then remember my soul
Then remember I will give you my soul
Then remember my soul is yours
Then remember the love
Then remember the old days
Then remember the happy days
Then remember the childhood
Then remember the noises
Then remember my voice
Then recall the advice
Then remember the passion
Then recall the moments
Then draw a smile
Then drop few tears
Then remember my replaced soul
Then remember I lost mine
Then remember it is with you
Then remember I sacrificed
Then remember it was for you
Then remember I am lost
Then remember NO life without you
Then remember I loved you all my life
Then remember I will not forget you
Then remember I was never happy
Then remember I was waiting for love
Then remember the love didn’t come to me
Then remember I died lonely
Then remember you are my pain
Then remember I never recovered
Then remember it was all for you
Then remember my face

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

And now the pain kills me
And now it is too late
And now I will die
And now you won’t care
And now I am forgotten
And now your pain hurts
And now it burns my heart
And now I cant handle it
And now I gave up
And now the sadness field me
And now I will say goodbye
And now I will forget you
And now like you did to me
And now I disappear
And now angle left the earth
And now the peace left the earth
And now the world is empty
And now I forgot the passion
And now no one reminded me
And now my hope was lost
And now I look at you
And now you are messing up
And now you played with my heart
And now you own my heart
And now I lost my heart
And now I miss my soul
And now I want it back
And now you can’t own me
And now I am me
And now you deserve nothing
And now you deserve being lonely
And now you deserve hate
And now I don’t need you
And now the happiness came to me
And now I forgot sadness
And now the sun shines yellow
And now the yellow is happiness

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

glade that u made it to the end ^^

[الوردة النارية]

It is nice poem thanks

[Iron Man]

WHAT YOU WROTE IS SIMPLY WONDERFUL DEAR Hamooza

thanks for sharing it

and wish you a happy year

regards

[نورررااا]

Beautiful poem hmozzaa

Happy New Year

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الوردة النارية

It is nice poem thanks

thanx for passing by

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

WHAT YOU WROTE IS SIMPLY WONDERFUL DEAR Hamooza

thanks for sharing it

and wish you a happy year

regards

glade u finished it

thanx alot for passin by

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HAPPY NEW YEAR

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نورررااا

Beautiful poem hmozzaa

Happy New Year

thanx alot for passin by

and glade u made it to the end :P

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HAPPY NEW YEAR

[نورالأحلام]

When I read the titel i don't know its sooo tall poem

Then I know its hamozaaa mmmmm i decided to kill u

And now after reading and i can't stop reading


I Have to Congratulations U on

this wonderful expression meanings

Thanks u dear keep on waiting for more

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نورالأحلام

When I read the titel i don't know its sooo tall poem

Then I know its hamozaaa mmmmm i decided to kill u

And now after reading and i can't stop reading


I Have to Congratulations U on

this wonderful expression meanings

Thanks u dear keep on waiting for more

lol

when i saw you replying i wanted to c it
then i saw that u finally made it
and now i would like to thank you


thanx alot sis

[دموع الاصايل]

when .then. and now ohhhhhhhhh my breath is cut but no problem becoz you did share for us nice nice nice a peom you have agreat and true feeling i loved your words thank alot for youuuuuu