I can not live without you

[الوردة النارية]

This is my firste poem I write I hope you like it.I write it at night

I can not live wethout you

I can not live wethout you
You are a part of me as my soul
Like the water I drinke
Like the air I breathe
I can not let you go
You are my love for ever
I can not give you for any body
Ican not let you go
I tell evrey one about you
I talk to you evrey day
My sou mea
My love for ever

[دموع الاصايل]

i cannot live without you

my soul
my heart
my every thing
nice poem

thank you very much

[الوردة النارية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة دموع الاصايل

i cannot live without you

my soul
my heart
my every thing
nice poem

thank you very much

Thank you

[Iron Man]

thanks a lot for this nice poem regards

[الوردة النارية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

Thank you for this comment

[Hamza23]

may i may i :P

i wanna write a reply for ur poem

this reply will be from the other person


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even my heart kept thinking about thee
your image field me with love and happiness
but days are not as soft as your heart and mine
days are harsh and trying to separate us apart
life is unfair but we got to live it and make it fair
it might not be the right time now, but it will be soon
i might go away but i will come back
my heart will always hear ur heart calling me
it always respond with i will come soon
and one day i will meet thee
under the light of a lonely moon
i will hold ur hand and look at your eyes
and tell you how much i missed you after these years
dont forget me, even if miles separated us apart
our heart will still meet at the moon light

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thanx for the lovely poem ,, and coz it was lovely i added a poem to it

thanx alot

[غـــــلا*]

thank you very much

[الوردة النارية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hamza23

may i may i :P

i wanna write a reply for ur poem

this reply will be from the other person


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even my heart kept thinking about thee
your image field me with love and happiness
but days are not as soft as your heart and mine
days are harsh and trying to separate us apart
life is unfair but we got to live it and make it fair
it might not be the right time now, but it will be soon
i might go away but i will come back
my heart will always hear ur heart calling me
it always respond with i will come soon
and one day i will meet thee
under the light of a lonely moon
i will hold ur hand and look at your eyes
and tell you how much i missed you after these years
dont forget me, even if miles separated us apart
our heart will still meet at the moon light

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thanx for the lovely poem ,, and coz it was lovely i added a poem to it

thanx alot

Tank you for this beutiful and lovley comment the poem you added it is so wounderful

[الوردة النارية]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غـــــلا*

thank you very much

Thanm you for your comment

[homy2003]

thank you very much

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