The Unclear Secrets

[Hamza23]

hi guys

new poem lol

this time i was thinking about some skool silly things

like finding truth and things like that

i wrote it at night like usully

ENJOY

"the unclear secrets "


The night sky seems clear
Hiding more than fear
The night is like a blanket
A black blanket that will cover secrets
The entire unknown is hidden in between
Waiting for me to light the screen
The day Is for us, but the night
The night is for the unknown secrets
When both day and night combine
They make great look and bright
But the unknown remains hidden
Under the smile of forbidden
Long time will pass
Before it is in the past
Long ago it remained secret
Under the yellow bright blanket
No tears should be dropped
For something haven’t been proved
The moon suddenly appears
To put the secrets on graves
This time, someone is tearing
For the loss of a beloving
This is the way we live
This is life
“Remained a secret”

hope u liked it

thanx all

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

interesting Hamzaa

I liked the poem so much and the use of metaphor < woow

u left me in a confusion

keep writing ^_*

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥

interesting Hamzaa

I liked the poem so much and the use of metaphor < woow

u left me in a confusion

keep writing ^_*

thanx alot mariam

lol u r not the only one confused hehe

however u should say "start typing ur poems" lol

coz i wrote alot but am too lazy to type it

thanx for passing by

[SECRETS~OF~LOVE]

perfetta poesia

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة SECRETS~OF~LOVE

perfetta poesia

marioma translate that

thanx for passing by

[نورالأحلام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hamza23

marioma translate that

thanx for passing by

its italy



perfect poetry

[نورالأحلام]

very lovelyyyyyyyy hamozyyyyyyy

you realy Talented

have a good Hobby

work on it and go on

we r waiting for more

[Hamza23]

^^

thanx for translating that lol

am hopeless in italian ^^

thanx for passing by ^^

[الوردة النارية]

: I like when you say
For the loss of a beloving
This is the way we live
This is life


it is realty and I like the poem at all

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الوردة النارية

: I like when you say
For the loss of a beloving
This is the way we live
This is life


it is realty and I like the poem at all

that part is about iraq and plastine ,, it is secret whats happening to them ,, but then we cry when we see them dying infront of us and we can do nothing about it

thanx alot dear for passing by