Losing a Beloved One

[Hamza23]

hi all

i wrote this poem on September 4th , when my aunt died

its a little bit too sad

Losing a Beloved One

i never imagined i will ever lose a dear person
i never thought of how to live with out u
it was fun teasing u
and make u mad
i liked ur reactions after that
i still remember the last time we chatted
we were laughing with each other
it was last year (2007)
when i saw u this year
i felt so sad
you were so sick and tired
but u still had ur smile
last time i saw u
u were in the hospital
i felt sad for u but still smiled for u
i am shocked to hear the news
but its too late to say goodbye
ur body is gone but ur soul is with us
may allah forgive all the muslims
and wish i will c u in heaven
may allah bless all the muslims
and bless ur pure soul
my pencil can not describe u
only allah who made u can
i cant describe how sad i am
to lose someone as dear as u

thanx all

[نورالأحلام]

nice poem Described the position of pain and power
by simple words come from heart

i wish she Spared by God and enter Paradise

thanks 4 sharing us ur poem and ur memories

waiting 4 more poems

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

this is the best That i have seen of ur writing
maybe because ur emotions and the state of ur mind back then led u to write this amazing poem

U are a true poet , I am telling u , keep writing

Alla yr7m 5altk Inshalla she is in heaven


Thakx for the poem

Ur sis MAriam

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نورالأحلام

nice poem Described the position of pain and power
by simple words come from heart

i wish she Spared by God and enter Paradise

thanks 4 sharing us ur poem and ur memories

waiting 4 more poems

it was the most sad moment in my life
i hope there is anything that will erase it from my momery

thanx for passing by

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥

this is the best That i have seen of ur writing
maybe because ur emotions and the state of ur mind back then led u to write this amazing poem

U are a true poet , I am telling u , keep writing

Alla yr7m 5altk Inshalla she is in heaven


Thakx for the poem

Ur sis MAriam

u havent seen the last poem i wrote

it is emotional and long

loli wrote it for a friendship

[Iron Man]

I didn't know that u have such a good writing abilities

nice poem indeed

thank u Hamza

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

Ok dear

I am waiting for u to post it

^_*

[الصريحه]

maryouma kifik kol sana w anti bkir w sory ala altakir bas inti dayman fi alalb

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

I didn't know that u have such a good writing abilities

nice poem indeed

thank u Hamza

it isnt hard to describe a feeling

all u need to do is trust ur pen

thanx for this sweet pass

[Hamza23]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥

Ok dear

I am waiting for u to post it

^_*

i will take a pic of the note book and u type it

lol deal?