The first written by me

[نورالأحلام]

The Window

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

One day I open my window

I am waiting sun to shine my room
or asking moon to leave secrets in home

I heard the bird singing the love end
an appel fall from the tree on his head

He was an old man siting under it

may be he asking sun to give him warm
or waiting moon to throw him a dream

there was a kite flying in the sky
handing it a child his small heart dream to go away
thinking the bright colours never make him cry

The clock ordering me to close the window

I will close the eyes on tears
may be one day we open window finding our dreams

written by me
Nour
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that is the first time ,the first thing i wrote
and i wish it is good , and i hope to know ur opinonsi

[Iron Man]

very nice poem dear Noor

keep it up

[نورررااا]

Thank you, my sister Noor Ali wonderful poem

[بسـ الطفـε(｡◕‿◕｡)зـوله ــمة]

seeing the world the way u see it

It is wonderfull

u r a dreamy and a peacefull girl

I loved the poem so much honestly

ur poem was wonderfull


Keep it up Noor
i am eager to read more of ur poems

Your sis Mariam

[$$meera$$]

The poem is very nice

And it's so wonderful

Thanks Noor for sharing it with us

Regards

[Cena4you]

awww its so nice

[نورالأحلام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Iron Man

very nice poem dear Noor

keep it up

I am glad that u liked

thanks 4 the lovely comment that make me go on

[نورالأحلام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة نورررااا

Thank you, my sister Noor Ali wonderful poem

thanks 4 ur scientific comment sister Abeer

[نورالأحلام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ♥МღА♥ЯღІ♥АღМ♥

seeing the world the way u see it

It is wonderfull

u r a dreamy and a peacefull girl

I loved the poem so much honestly

ur poem was wonderfull


Keep it up Noor
i am eager to read more of ur poems

Your sis Mariam

A great thanks 4 the encourge comment that make me very glad and go

Merci dear sis. Mariam

[نورالأحلام]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة $$meera$$

The poem is very nice

And it's so wonderful

Thanks Noor for sharing it with us

Regards

A lot thanks 4 the lovely comment Dear Meera