Journey Of an eagle

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welcome every one.
Today i will share with you a poem i have written in high school , about one year ago
i hope u like it


Spreading his wings in the sky
He is free, because he was born to fly
In this journey which has no end,
The sun is his only friend
He is happy singing his song
Searching for a kingdom to belong
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all of a sudden , another world, a shadowy place
where the saddness has defeated his smiling face
people were dying in infinte numbers
voices screaming , , fainted whispers
No , what happened to this place!
The heaven he believed in has no trace
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slowly falling down , surrendering to death
what happened to ur dreams?? voices wondering deep inside
To acomplish ur dreams , u must survive
Till then , the journey of an eagle is still alive
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[عبير الحب]

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ŏVз ЄαŦαŠţЯŏpĦә£

It is beautiful poem
but I think you have to change some sentences
Like The sun is his only friend to Only the sun is his friend

Try again and write more and you will be better

Good luck


Thank you very much


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with my regards
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[~GiiGii~]

Poem harm than wonderful
thnx marioma

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبير الحب

[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

ŏVз ЄαŦαŠţЯŏpĦә£

It is beautiful poem
but I think you have to change some sentences
Like The sun is his only friend to Only the sun is his friend

Try again and write more and you will be better

Good luck


Thank you very much


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"
with my regards
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[فقط الأعضاء المسجلين والمفعلين يمكنهم رؤية الوصلات . إضغط هنا للتسجيل]

thanks sister for ur feed back , but i have chosen not to start with only so i can give it a stress, that wont show if i started with
it
thanks again 4 passing by
best wishes
ur sis
MaRiAm

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ~GiiGii~

Poem harm than wonderful
thnx marioma

What is wonderful is u dear and ur reply
thanks a lot for passing by
love